Willow Weight Gain1

Nice tease to a long comic the portions are better in this than your other work. So your getting better each post. Personally a bit to pink maybe add a slightly less shadow. Leather texture is nice <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Overall looking forward to the rest of the series. Consider belly portions in up coming pages also try not to hide the hands to much, hands can be a good way in drawing attention to a character. Or setting a certain mood of a piece. Red heads are a personal Fave of mine so love the tones in the hair also maybe get rid of those lines on he fave below her bottom lip. Excited to see more!!